The Big SPELLING & TEXT MISTAKES Thread

KoBeWi

Jumpkin
PlantaeHostilis_Description
"The spores they shoot out are not for reproduction, but a defensive mechanism that explodes on contact."

There's some grammatical problem in this sentence. Spores are probably meant to be defensive mechanism, but it sounds like they are for a defensive mechanism.

ThornWorm_Card
Ends with exclamation mark, while other introduced cards don't even have a dot at the end.

ThornWorm_Description
"they have no carapace and is easy to take out"

Cutscene_FirstBack02b
Question mark is purple in line 3/6.
 
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The G-Meister

Giga Slime
"Enter the grand city of Evergrind City"? Two instances of "city" that close just sounds off. You might say Evergrind City or the City of Evergrind, but not a combination of both.

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The G-Meister

Giga Slime
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Ohhh the wonders of Alt + PrtScn :D

I don't think anyone's brought this up yet: "This year's exams surely was a tough business."

"exams" and "was" don't really fit together. If we're classing "the exam" as an event, it would be "This year's exam surely was" and if we're classing "the exams" as the collective events undertaken by everyone, it would be "This years exams surely were".
 

armaa

Green Slime
When you first interact with the hat saler in the city, he first responds with this message
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Then when you select the talk option, they respond with this message
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Not sure if intended or not, but one exclamation mark is missing..
 

Torento

Green Slime
In Tai Ming the quest "A Matter of Time" it says "Explore the cave up north" instead of Obtain an Emblem of Faith. I did reset Tai Ming and I don't know if that was there before. This is right when I got the quest, before Tessen told me to.
 

The G-Meister

Giga Slime
"Let's return to Sizou with our findings."

Bag says this line after you've got Mana's thing she likes to do from her diary. This implies that you've got all three secrets, despite the fact that you may not know her favorite type of flower.
 

The G-Meister

Giga Slime
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Description of Gold Charge Ice Spikes says "Spikes reaches", then "covers" and "is". Because spikes is plural, these should be "reach", "cover" and "are".
 

KoBeWi

Jumpkin
Just flushing my notes. Hopefully not much of them repeat.

Missing colors: (if I'm wrong, you probably won't notice the word)
Rock_QuestCompleted02
Steve_GettingFired01
Cutscene_SizousHouse01
Cutscene_SizousHouse06
Tessen_FirstZone01
GuardC_FirstZone01
TreasureForAKingObjective01
ManaQuest02Repeat (grave)
Cutscene_AfterTaiMing03

Trip01 - "set up shop" - should be booth or stall maybe
Chix_GiveQuest01, QuestMaster_AfterWormFight08 -"collector" should be "Collector" like elsewhere
beta end texts - not for faint of heart = not for the faint-hearted (probably?)

MultiplayerTip01 - "is key in preventing" -> "a key" or "the key" maybe

Faita02 - "I have been drinking too much" -> "I have drunk too much" (maybe?)
Saya03, Reiko01_LowWater - maybe it should start from capital letter after ...
Guard01 - "unless they" -> "unless you"
Mana02 - "oinment" -> "ointment"
Cutscene_ThirdFlashback08 - "faithful children" -> "faithful child"
Archie01 - should be comma before but
 

Own

Moderator
Trip01 - "set up shop" - should be booth or stall maybe

Setting up shop is a phrase/idiom.

MultiplayerTip01 - "is key in preventing" -> "a key" or "the key" maybe

Depends on the context.

"Shielding is key in preventing your death." is the correct phrase, a key / the key aren't.

Faita02 - "I have been drinking too much" -> "I have drunk too much" (maybe?)

The latter is past tense and implies they're through, which I'm not sure Faita is. And even if she is, "I've had too much to drink." is a less awkward way to say it.
 

MrChocodemon

Handsome Moderator
Sorry for the missing screenshot, but if you start the exam and speak to the receptionist there is a point in the cutscene where she apologizes for Marinos behaviour. Her dialogue is somewhat like this:

Receptionist said:
The "rich people" are main investors in The Arena.

Neither "The" nor "Arena" should be capitalised in this situation. (Except if the name of the arena was "The Arena" (which would make me furious :p ))
 

MrChocodemon

Handsome Moderator
Exam should be written in lower case
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Collector is sometimes written with a capital C and sometimes with a lower case c. This should be unified (preferrably lower case c).collector.PNG
 

MrChocodemon

Handsome Moderator
Old World should either be lower case, or coloured.
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EDIT: I since learned that this is correctly capitalised. Colouring still debatable.
 
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MrChocodemon

Handsome Moderator
Teleport Plates either coloured or lower case.
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Only to be used by highly ranked collectors? Does player even qualify?

EDIT: I'm gonna stop here. There are far too many words which should either be highlighted with colour to emphasise them or be written in lower case
 

MrChocodemon

Handsome Moderator
Two things at once as those follow each other directly.

Shouldn't this be singular? Not sure on this one.
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Previous sentence ends with a period.
...but the next starts with a triple period

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